Work in progress!
Does the below panel look better with or without the color blocks? They don’t serve any narrative purpose, I just liked how they looked at first. Now I’m not so sure they fit the style of everything else that I’m doing.
Which looks better below, with or without dark blue in panel 3?
Considering making this one a GIF if I can. It’ll show the dotted line pop up one dot at a time and Charlotte pop up when it gets to that dot. Then maybe I also need to make the leaves move? Don’t know. That’ll be a last minute change kinda thing.
Below is another one with multiple versions. Full and cropped! I thought the composition wasn’t very good in the full version.
New thing I thought of just using Squarespace gallery tools. Like a zoom in with each shot. Does it work?